Comments : Slip Away

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Gud poem...i liked it...dere was parts dat were confusin but itz ok...overall gud job

  • 17 years ago

    by tastefull

    That is very touching babe 5/5 i love ur poems x

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Wow really great i love it

    timehealsallwounds*

  • 17 years ago

    by just a poet

    Ouch, beautiful. but is it love or lust for their beauty? hope ur happier soon anyway. loved this such simple yet powerful words. the poets on this site seem to be getting better and better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brandy

    Wow very good