Gud poem...i liked it...dere was parts dat were confusin but itz ok...overall gud job

That is very touching babe 5/5 i love ur poems x

Wow really great i love it

timehealsallwounds*

Ouch, beautiful. but is it love or lust for their beauty? hope ur happier soon anyway. loved this such simple yet powerful words. the poets on this site seem to be getting better and better.

Wow very good