Umm...itz kinda confusin..but u did a gud job...3/5

It's a good poem but you need to edit it and take all the weird stuff the computer put in there it does it on mine to just take it out and than i noticed in this sentence"Am I just thinking you still here with me?" it should be your*

Hope I helped. :]
Rach♥

It's a good poem, just need to edit the spelling & jibberish around it. Heh.
Good job.x