Excellent poem. Reminds me of words from Shakesphere
''What is a rose, by anyother name, that would smell just as sweet''
It does not need much tweeking or ways to make it better.

Beautiful write.
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Aw, this sounds really sad, hope ur okaye if this is true, i couldnt bare to loose a love :'(... anyways ur a really great poet =] k

5/5 [xxx].leah.[ooo]

That was really good....