Hey mate great job! There were just a few gramatical errors, probably just typos! but just thought I'd make you aware! :D but yea I loved the title it caught my eye! well done hun. keep it up! xoxo Ruthie

Great job again! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Good, flowed nicely

Few typos, but i really understood what you were saying, i'm kinda in that situation at the moment, so it really meant alot to me! thanx for sharing

Nice job, you can add more imagery and try making the lines shorter