That is really sad, how dare he treat that kid like that. Keep it up, thanks for entering my contest

Damn this one is so dark for me, it just gives a shiver in me & creates a urge in me to kill such a man.
u really created so much of reactions in me with this one which proves how effective it was...great write indeed
all the best and take care
5/5

Gr8 work loved the detail! amazing job! 5/5