Comments : My Thoughts On Paper

  • 17 years ago

    by mandy

    I this poem its deep and straight to the point keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I absolutely love this poem. The short lines really add emphasis and depth to the poem and gives it an amazing effect. You did such a great job on this. It has to be one of the best poems that I've read in a while. Wonderfully written! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Very unquie. I love the style and setup of this one. I felt the emotions and what not through it. I am sorry for how hard those months where. Hope you are having better ones though. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great job,
    perfect, and nice job again.5/5