Comments : Within The Mirror

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved your poem, it's really good. The ending was perfect, the last line was my favorite "but a reflection cannot lie". That's so true, sometimes we try to tell ourselves what we want to think, but deep inside we know the truth. We cannot lie to ourselves. That's what I understood about your poem...you're depressed, and you want to fight to get better, but you don't know how or know if it's possible.

    Good job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg i love htis poem. its soo amazing.. i feel that way... its how my life goes. its a great poem.. its one of the best i have read.. ur a great writer.. amazing job.. keep on writing i would love to read more of ur poems..
    take care
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    WOW. This was very good. I loved the twist at the end, A reflection can't lie. Very nice. And I really liked the second stanza. Thought it was great! Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow. its a strong poem. but it flows realy well and sounds so great =) well done

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by JAMIE

    Wow! 5/5 great poem! i love it and it is so true. but hang in there, everyone gets their happiness. that's what i learned. even thought i thought my happiness is over i hang in there and think more of the possitives rather than the negatives.

    jamie

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    You do a great job with sad topics. I really like this one too.

  • 17 years ago

    by StefQ

    It's a perfect peom =) i'm serious =) the only thing i could think is this :

    She's broken and she knows it,
    scarred beyond repair.
    Forced to live her life,
    in this cruel state of despair.

    -> scarred beyond repair , that line just doesn't sound right for me :s

    but still good poem =) 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    If only I could save her,
    and every night I try.
    I'd tell her life gets better,
    but a reflection cannot lie...

    EXCELLENT POEM. FLOWED WELL AND THE SENTIMENT WAS AWESOME.

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I loved the ending. You built it up like you were talking about someone else so the ending had a nice little kick to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    I love the twist at the end. It gave me chills. Nice flow 5/5

    - Thanks for reading my poem -

    ~ Tina