Odd, but good,

XOXO
RLS

This was so good! I loved it. Especially the last couple of lines. Really great job, Keep it up =] 5/5

`Taleee xx

Very nice descriptions, good job

Another great poem.. I loved the opening stanza and the way that you described death. It really captured my attention, and the rest of it was great as well.. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well.. 5/5**