Thats fantastic.....keep it up! 5/5!

Very very VERY well written such talent tahnk you for your kind comment on my own poem. You get a 5 from me hunni
thanks

Ayesha

I like it!I like it!I like it!I like it!I like it!

I like it lots, but some of the ryhmes were a lil off but really great keep writing. ^_^

Excellent poem, lovely flow. 5/5

XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

P.S-Thanks for the comment.

*!You're really good yourself....I like this one...I like the way you really put your heart into it!*
Keep it coming!!!
*J Lee*

Flows like alot

That ruins the poem...

life for me is crappy

As does this...

Those lines could be better modified or you could you better vocabulary to better those sentences... Otherwise the overall poem was pretty good and spoke well for itself.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

This is a good poem. It has a lot of emotion and meaning to it.
keep it up.

xoxo,
Chelsea*

ps- thanks for commenting on my poem.. :D

Your poems are great i love them thanks for the comment ~-ericamayb~-

This poem is really good. thanks for commenting mine. i like your poems. 5/5

fadedheart

Even the nobodies means the world to someone you just have to find that person and pray they aren't... well yeah keep strong and thanks for the comment on my poem.

Hey nice poem... try to be positive once in a while... it wont hurt to smile :D i hope you find someone who can make you feel good about yourself... because everyone means the world to someone... :D keep writing, love the poem!

~angel~

Loved it, 5/5 keep it up :)

5/5 THESE POEMS ARE SO AWESOME

Fab, fab, fab...and i thought mine were good lmao
~sarah~

This poem is very well written. I can relate so much. You have a very unique style of writing. I like it a lot. Keep it up. Thnxs for the comment.

This poem is crazy deep