Gosh...this was such and amazing poem...i have really enjoyed reading this...keep it up my friend

Your poem is really good, I imagined everything that you described. And I can relate to what you said.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wow i love your poem
well done
i too can relate to what you said
great job keep it up!!!

5/5

Very well written, you effectively relate what I have often felt. This ones definitely worth framing!