This is a nice poem,I liek !t

The truth image of life. mostly people face these situation intheir life. i think this poem should have be in lifesection poetry. but its up toyou. greatwork.

take care 5/5

Great Job =)

I love this poem. i kno the feeling.

I know the feeling of wanting to start over... I love this poem it's amazing =]

Great poem and well written , word choice was excellent but sad , it's true life can very hard and things don't always go the way we want em too, but we can't give up, must push on to see what else we can conquer, never give up on yourself , in right life you are the only that believes in you, great write, your friend Tracy d......5/5

Hey
i really liked ur poem
keep it up
xoxo

Hey i really liked this poem...its really awesome...i love how you repeat alot of words i really like that in poems...alot of others dont but i do...awesome poem....Manda

This is really good! Ive only read two of your poems(miss you&life experiances) and I can really relate!I feel truely touched.

This is really good for a first poem and it shows alot of promise... keep it up 5/5

It's very good! There are are times I have feel that way too.

Very personal. I love this poem, it sort of related to both me and people around me. 5/5 keep up the good work

Wow.
I really like this one. Great work!
You should definitely check out some of my poetry.
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If this is your first poem, then i can only anticipate that you will be a great writer a lot sooner than u know. nice