I got teary reading that. Really well done! Nice flow to it. Keep it up. :P

Aww thats so cute

"
Your eyes tell me stories,
ones of you and me.
About a couple deep in love,
and a man on bended knee."
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I think that you should try putting a 'a' between 'on' and 'bended'.

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Great poem 5/5
xoxo
Diana