Comments : Forgotten Memory

  • 17 years ago

    by Laasya

    Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Dani

    Wow what a great poem and so true! keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Veronica

    Aww u know what that is true I never even thought of that but ya! Well great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I like the rhyming, and thought the rhythm was okay. I disagree with what you're saying though... people remember others for all sorts of reasons.. I mean I remember my dead DOG at completely random times, and that definitely isn't just once per year.

  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Wow...*grins* thanks guys. that was actually the first poem i ever wrote, I'm glad you liked it!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Thorns On My Grave~

    I really like this. I wrote a poem similar to this once...but I was a lot younger, and it didn't turn out very well. Yours is very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by scott

    I like this poem, but just remember that its better to have someone remember you, then no one even knowing you

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    OMG....thats so...short..but seriously touching...Holy Cow..imma read it again...H/O...ok back it gives me goose bumps...yeah..your def. good.

    Batman