Thanks for sharing. The message might help some tormented soul. Only the truly tormented can ever know hell.

I can relate to this poem, sometimes i wonder if anyone would notice if i just disappeared, but i think i realise now that sometimes people care more than you think, and you just have to be positive about yourself, so that others too can see you this way. i know this probably doesnt mean much now, since these poems you wrote a while ago, but i like this poem, i can see youre pain through it xxx thanks for commenting on my poem btw, i wrote that poem quite quickly, and reading it back i can see what you mean, it is definitely not one of my better poems, but thank u anyway xx

Wow, i can really feel the emotion in this poem, thanx for sharing! hope your in a happier place now! =)

5/5

Full of emotions, a wonderful, powerful write although it sounds rather sad. I hope you are ok and I can totally relate to the poem. The structure of the poem is great and I think you are very talented. Keep it up :)

In proper English, that title is incorrect. "If I WERE To Leave", which also causes a problem for the line with the title name. Other than that, it's a decent poem. Well, for someone who wrote it in Junior High.

Wow, that's scary... but really good for someone in Junior High... hope everything is better now

This is sad :-( It's a short poem, but the best poems in my opinion are always written honestly and I can really tell this is how you felt at the time. I hope things have got better for you since then... The only way you could improve this is to slightly alter the layout so the rhymes are all in the same places.
- Polly

Wow...this is really good!