Good poem but some words are needed

Really good! So full of heart! Great job! 5/5 all the way. Thanks for the comments.

Wow this poem is really good. i like how oyu conpare that the person wishes he was dead, even though so many people would live his life in a snap. keep writing :]

Intresting poem here, u do speak ur mind thats a good thing to see nice work xox sam

Thats a pretty kewl poem!
well love ya bye!

I really like this.. i hope that you finish it soon! Great job! I added you to my favs. You're talented! Keep it up!

Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one

Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one

Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one

I like ur writing..its very deep...keep writing like this...nice job 5/5

I love your poems . Really good.

Great poem - again. Keep it up.

Wow nd ppl say im a good writer lol ur alot better!!!!

Very well written, i love the ending.. check out my other poems, they are much better, that was a random poetry contest where u have to make up one in 30 seconds. anyway, i also love the A Girl Is... poem, one day a girl will embrace that in you, lovely day, aja

Even tho it aint finish its pretty kewl.
i likes it. its been a long time no message or comment.
I got lots of new poems lol
check em out if ya wanna and tell me wat ya think.
well g2g bye!