Sounds like a great guy.

This one was okay! I can't say it was my favorite. It definatley could have went on longer. More details more more more

Wow.. this has had a lot of visits.. lol.. great job! it was very sweet.. i loved it.. the emotion was clear as were your descriptions!

the patience you have with him and your never mad
^ maybe try rearanging this a bit.. it sounds a bit off.. for example :
"your patient with him and never get mad"

nice write.. very enjoyeable! 5/5