Hmm good, great, got the point :D

That was very good. got to always be there for your sister you never know when she needs you the most. 5/5

P.S. thanks for the comment

I realy like this poem. i can relate to it through my lil sis. im gonna show it to her, hope u all do!

Very sweet poem, just remember that poems don't exactly consist of sentences

Good poem... sweet, beautful... nice job

Baby sister listen to me you need him you got me, and loads of friends and family,
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I think you m eant " You don't need him" but I don't know.

Other then that I really liked this poem, I can relate to it as well..It was very caring and very heart felt..I love the way you write your poems...they are different but that is what makes them unique! great job 5/5

Very cute! wish my brothers were that nice! lol great poem i loved it!

Shel