Comments : Plucked Daisy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Symbolism is hard to pull off. You should use it only when you're comfortable with it.
    Still no answer.
    I need a straight answer
    [You should use double words only in rare times. The two answer words take from each other.]
    That bare stem stares back at
    [At what? Maybe ake out the word at or add something]

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I love this! The message in it is subtle but it's goooood :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Thank you all... it was my first attempt at symbolism, and i thought it was a pretty good poem myself... i tried to relate it to something we all understand, hopefully i did... it was one of my favorite poems myself... thanks for the comments!

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Well I'll give you a 5 cause I feel bad.

    Haha.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    It was different. But I liked it. I really liked the message in this. Wanting a straight answer. I can relate alot.

    I need a straight answer
    Instead of feeling like a pinball
    In the game of life.
    [I liked those lines alot. I've never read someone writing about life being a pinball game. Very creative.]

    Keep up the great work. It was a wonderful poem. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I REALLY like this. The imagery is great. Great message.