No offence while the poem was good with the black rose line, which could probably also reperesent lost dreams or a dying love, the poem just seemed your typical suicide poem. I really would have liked it if you could have gone into a bit more of the emotions instead of just telling what was happening.

Not trying to sound stuck-up or annoying at all but punctuation and capitalization would improve this a bit. I like the last two lines a lot, is that a quote from something?

Nice and sad