I love this poem!!!! the writing style is aazingly different.......i really like the wording

Interesting read. Very powerful.
Jus one suggestion...

Knife
Blood
Nightmare

maybe you could change it to
bloody
nightmare

as i think that would flow a lil smoother...for the other lines only have 2 words singled out and that one part had 3 words.
I think this was one of my favorite''s of your poems...truly touching.

This is different...unique...but really good! the word choices are great...good job 5/5