Comments : The no-one girl

  • 17 years ago

    by al taylor

    I like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    No idea, but I liked it.. It was sinister and very sad.. I just loved it.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I'm not sure what type of poem this is to be honest.

    It suffers in a few areas; repetition, lack of punctuation and flow.

    You have the ability to take this draft and create somethign much more powerful.

    I dare you to do so!

    Bret

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    I really like this poem, not quite sure what type of peom it is though. 5/5