I like it!

No idea, but I liked it.. It was sinister and very sad.. I just loved it.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I'm not sure what type of poem this is to be honest.

It suffers in a few areas; repetition, lack of punctuation and flow.

You have the ability to take this draft and create somethign much more powerful.

I dare you to do so!

Bret

I really like this poem, not quite sure what type of peom it is though. 5/5