Comments : LOVE DOES NOT CONQUER ALL

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    So not right no one should ever be treated like that soo sad :((
    Your poem told a good story :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I hold you till you die,
    and say a silent prayer.
    I loved you my darling,
    but your rage could not comapare."

    You have a knack for writing poems about emotional subjects and they always get the point across perfectly.
    Excellent as always
    5/5
    *Gem*