Comments : Making Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Hold Me

    That poem rele is a amazing discription, its rele good, amazing infact 5/5
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by PrInCeSs CaNdY12

    That was an awsome poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Heather w

    Your poem as alot of feeling in it.i loved it and keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Great poem! lots of details! keep up the good writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by TiTI

    If his breath is warm you need to lead him to the bathroom and get some colgate, and don't make direct contact with that hot ass breath :>c

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    WOW!!!!!! That's FANTASTIC. Absolutely breath taking. Love the image it creates in one's head... Yummy