it does make sense... and it is a very sad poem.... double suicide... (I think there is a typi, though... about half way through,,, should the "NOT" be "NOW"? 'and now it is you I tell')

Anyway... I see where lalya was probably confused..near the end, where the voice turns to that of the second person and then switched back to the voice of the 1st person... You have to make your mind see who's speaking and it will make sense....

Please correct me if I'm wrong on any of this Kelleigh...

Either way, I think it's very good!

lol @ typi.... ummm that's supposed to be typo.... LOL

Hi. My name is Faith. I really like your poem. It's really sad. I had tears streaming down my face. You wrote that poem very good no matter what other people say.