I like the change of pace that this goes through a couple times. It's not one consistent pace.

Great poem

Hey! Thanks for the comment! I always return the favor! You're new huh? It's cool! reminds me to myself! You write well... you might keep on writing then you will become better i swear! Thanks... i'll keep an eye to your work!

Thank you so much!
Charlie

Wow! that was - wow..
I love it!