That was pretty good. You were looking at leaves with a whole new perspective, i like that. You some good describing words too. You gave autumn a whole different name.

Hi,rain,thanks for your comment!I'm new to this forum,but i like the atmosphere here.Actually the dancing leaf refers to sth beautiful in my heart,or love,this poem is dedicated to the memories of my encounter with my unexpected love.Thanks for appreciation.

Gr8 work. loved it. keep it up. loved the details!

Hi,who cares,thanks for your encouragement.I love your poem as well~~~

That was very strong and very beautiful. I enjoyed reading that a lot. Please continue writing so that I can read more of your work.

Ravyn

You really do make that leaf dance.