Aw my hunni, this is so sad
its such a perfect poem 5/5

...[xXx]...leah...[oOo]...
p.s. id like to know what you think of mine.

Aww wow great poem
very good =] i love these two lines:
this wasn't my wish this wasn't my dream
u stand there and watch me scream
your very talented keep up the great work and stay strong
im sure you'll find someone whos way better than luke =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx
&&thanks for the comment =]

Hey great poem. its got a lot of feeling in it and i love that! thanks so much for commenting on mine too. your a great writer~whittney

Depressing....nice...