Bah! not place? they wouldn't know a good poem if it bit them in the butt! haha. Seriously, I liked it a lot. I thought it was a beautiful poem and excellently written. Wonderful job.

Some of the lines are a bit repetitive but the imagery is beauitful in a way. The message does get across. YOur rhyming parts didn't seem forcedand your descriptions were pretty decent.

Nice job this is also one of your better poems i think great work i enjoyed readin your poems