This was superb so full of emotion i'm adding you to my favourites. i'd love to hear what you think of my stuff.

xoxo

Amazing poem---endless flow of emotion in it 5/5 keep it up

Wow that was a wonderful poem. I really know how you feel and the parts I didn't have expirance in, you made me feel the pain. Wonderful poem. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Yer on my faves list, yer an amazing writter.

ps
my e-mail: dramaqueen_haylo@yahoo.ca

hugz

That's a pretty deep poem. I just think you should write it out in stanzas. It was kinda hard to read. But I don't know how well that would work. This seems more like a freestyle type poem, like it poured out of your heart. Hmm, well, it's interesting. Keep up the good work.

Very deep. I love this poem. It's reminds me of...me. And issues that I have sometimes. Great job =) xoxo

Samantha

Exellent poem! *hugs* I hope that you you will feel better soon. I really like how you express a lot of feeling, so much emotion without overdoing the ryhmes.

Miranda

P.S.....HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!

Omfg i lovethis madd cute i can deff relate:)

Excellent opening, you have captured the art of how to draw the reader into the poem. well done this is a good talent. great poem with lots of emotion in it and its very strong, i hope your ok. xxxxxxxx

Good job, love this one