To tell the truth. I think this is one of the best poems I have read lately. The language and wording you used was really good. And, I really liked the last stanza. To me it felt like it was the most powerful point in the poem. Really great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Youe poems are brilliant and your're extremely talented. I coudn't resist the comment in your thread lol. Take care.

The language youv'e used is very sophisticated, a nice effect but sometimes makes it difficult to relate to

You just have amazing vocabulary to put forth into your writing.. And I Love it.. I'm not really sure what to say, but I did like the write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5