I liked your poem. It has quality.

It's unique, with a little of everything to please whomever wants a good read

That is a very good poem, it is very well written

I think the way you set the poem out was really good and it had it's own meaning to it which made it good to read. I thought you did an excellent job so keep it up & take care :)

"Like rose petals thundering through my sewing hands." An absolutely amazing and beautiful line. Please keep writing, you have such talent. Awesome work!

~jas~