Comments : Powder Bodies

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    This is a good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    This is a good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by desiree

    A thats good i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Cool Poem. A Few Probs- Is it Body Or Bodies In The 1st Stanza? And in the 2nd there's a freaky typo thing. But over all very creative..

    4/5

    xLauren3

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    I really liked that. great choice of words. thanks for commenting on mine too.
    dee