Deep and very heartfelt... love the ending!

Wow!!! holy shit opps sorry lol well i loved this poem like jenn said deep so much sadness ran through me when i read this very nice 5/5 keep the good work up xoxroxyxox

Ur poem is beautiful. 5/5 it flows and expresses so much emotion in so few words

Another good 1

october

Omg!! this is awesome!! you're a great writer. keep up the awesome work!!
if you can, maybe you can check out some of my poems.
~maggie

I loved it Hoppy 5/5