OH MEE GEE!!!!!!! u have this talent w/ ur words, that just blows me away!!!!!!! u have such a talent!!! 5/5!! wow...i feel ur rain just bleeding through ur words as the blood would through a vain! i feel ur pain and i am so sry! just stay strong babe!!! stay strong
The imagry in this poem are great. And the poem itself is so desperate and sad. You did an amazing job.
Hey, I actually have a poem called "bleeding crimson rain". You might like it.
Anyways, great job! And keep it up!