This is beautiful Bill... I always look forward to your wonderful writings. The last two lines are fantastic and sum up the whole poem. A very loving piece.

Very good. I like it. Keep writing!!

Nice poem. I enjoy to read it.

Aww this sweet great job but i dont understand the title

Wow. Very romantic. You have a beautiful style. I bet you write love poems to yur wife. She is a lucky woman

Wow this is a great and touching poem. I love the way it's written so beautifully and sweet. keep up the good work :)

Thats really good. words can not explain how i feel about this poem. your really good. :]
always&forever
-jennifer-