Fantastic! Very real feeling. You convey the scene well.

Wow! thats really good. i love it Joe lol. your awsome too. i havent tlked 2 u n a while but your prlly doin great lol. well keep up the good work nd neve change your like the bream guy no joke. well love yahzz cassie

Tht was so touchy like i was there wen this happened....
God bless u dear

Wow. i really like this :) good jobb!

5/5. I am sorry that this happened to you or anyone as matter of fact. I loved it of how you wrote this. Its so emotional.

Omg that is really sad, did it honestly happen? hope your okay. but anyway that is a really really really good poem, and i like it

Loved it! is it true? if it im so sry...that would be horrible...well written and flowed well. def keep up the good work. id appreciate it if u could comment on my poems
andi

Whoa that must have been quite a scary thing going through.
I like in this poem that your coming to the point very easily, it's really a straight in your face piece. It also doesn't get boring at all, captivated from the start.
I hope you are doing good on this day and the quote in the end sums it up very well.
I really like your work.

5/5

xo angelique