You are a very accomplished poet. I think it is good the way you challenge yourself in these contests.

Indeed it's good...simple yet very meaningful

Loving the meaning of the poem
You have unquie stlyes of writing your poems.i think its cool that you do the contest but i think if you did a free verse poem your poetry would be alot better since you can say more with out limits but other then that you r a great writer keep it up

''With my last breath
Love you til Death''

I LOVED this part.
I thought that this poem was very good, I enjoyed it alot.