5/5. Very nice write. I really like the poem for the ryhmes. I'd say it need alittle more flow to it. I like the real life feel to it especaily the "lost in your eyes" allusion. I do that alot when I look at my crush. But good job and keep on writing.

Wow... is this about who i think it's about????? lol anyways it's really good!@!!

Haha... no rachel. this poem isn't good enough for that. lol