Wow this far better then any of mine! lol Really good poem. :)

I really liked this one.

There was a line I didn't understand:

"Would you still come to me
If you knew all my falls"

But apart from that I really liked it. It was heartfelt and you could tell that by the way you have writtin it.
nicely done. 5/5.

Very excellent poem indeed...Nice Work

Such an excellent poem indeed...I really love this piece of work...