Comments : I got your back

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "i remenise of all the years **"
    'reminisce' not 'remenise'
    ~~~
    I thought the rhyming worked out very well, but instead of using the asterisks, I'd just make the poem into stanzas and format it a little better -- it makes it easier for the reader.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nada

    I can rele relate to tht poem...i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This poem shows how much talent you have! It was really well written. It had great depth and was very powerful. I love how the first line and the last line have the same sort of meaning but are phrased differently. It makes the theme of the poem more clearly expressed and stronger to the reader. Great write-the flow was amazing! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    I wish all friendships were this picture perfect, love your work.
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooo sweet and very very heartfelt...I can relate to this ALOT! You are such a good friend..anyone would be lucky to have you in there life! This was great and full of emotions, the rhythm was great! 5/5

    love ya =D
    _-_Chanelle_-_

  • 17 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    It flowed pretty well I liked it it was short so it didn't need much organization so its all good.
    ~~Retniapdoolb

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    'when your cheeks are wet from drops of tears
    I reminise of all the years'

    the best line! once again a poem filled with flawless rhyming :)

    -biscuit-