Hey darl i liked this poem. it was sh0rt and sweet l0t 0f em0ti0n. i liked it 5/5 fr0m me thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t xx
love from
dora

Cute little poem
alot of emotion was put into
ur doing a great job
keep it up

This was a short poem-but it still held a lot of emotion. I liked how you had quotes in it- I thought it was a nice twist! Good work! 5/5

Aww, your poem is cute too (im returning your comment) it was short and sweet. those ar emy fav. kinds of poems b/c i dont have to sit and read for 1/2 an hour.

I love this. its very expressive. i always find that short poems have a much greater impact than long ones were the meaning is often hidden by the features of the poem. and this is no exception. its beatiful :)

-biscuit-