The first stanza and last were definitely better than the middle two. Definitely liked them a lot more.

I'm tired and I'm cold
I don't want to think about next week
All I see is the pain it could hold
The future is so bleak

^^ the start is very strong...and hopeless..and reallly relatable. so great job on that.

and like i said, the ending is good too. great job. ^.^

Amazing! This is a big improvement from you suicide poem. The structure of the poem is great and the ryhmes are excellent. Keep writing! 5/5