Beautiful polly. reminds me of someone i know...i love the last part. its a perfect way to end the poem. keep it up
=) cherry

I really like it. I especially like the last stanza. I've definitely felt that way before. Great job.

Loved the last stanza. It was really good. The poem itself was good though. It all flowed nicely with a good rhyme scheme. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Yet again amazing work. Your wording and detail was great, I really love your poems. I can't help but repeat myself but it's so true.

Aww.. this was so sad.. i loved it.. it really appealed to me, and was slightly refreshing.. finally a poem about real feeligns.. nice job! 5/5