Great poem-really deep 5/5

Amazing poem. its so deep and sad.. but i can relate to it sorta.. ur very talented. keep writing.. keep ur head up and stay strong.. this was a great poem.. 5/5
take care
angie

I were these crimson bracelet\\\'s upon my wrists

[I loved this line so much, but it should be {wear not were}]

Now, I really loved this but I'm going to give you a suggestion that might help your ratings - Use punctuation.. It'll help the flow of the poem so much better.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5