This is VERY good I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Hey i know that feeling. hang in there. great poem though. keep writing.
lots of love
hayley

Thats a very good written poem 5/5

Very well composed and straight to the point. Thank You so very much for sharing =o)

Well i can also, relate to this one lol...i'm sooo frusturated with boy's right now, it's driving me insane..but i loved this poem, you showed great emotions in it! it was great