Comments : Trying to get over *you* you make me smile but make me blue

  • 17 years ago

    by courtney

    I like it and it comes from the heart and that always makes them good 5/5
    ~courtney~

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Sparklepants --
    You asked me to comment on something, so I decided to comment on this. =D It was really good! Why on earth do you only have four poems up? That makes no sense. Write some more. You may not think you`re good, but you really are. Get your butt outta that chat room a little more often, and get to writing some poetry! Lol. Great job! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Amamzing..wow love it.

    Lissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    "just a scar
    on my heart
    and notch
    on your belt."
    ^this is my favorite line. i can totally relate.

    i like your writing and style :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Aleesha

    I like it a lot. It is really good. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow...this poem is really sad...im sorry. you wrote it very well though. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by rEn

    O.o...loved it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    O.o.o.o this is soooo sad, very good tho beautifully written!
    keep it up!

    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    That was great =) so true for all of us

  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Super ahmazing i love it good job keep writing