Great poem! I love the title of it-it sums up the poem. The simile throughout the whole thing was great. You have good description in it and the way you worded things was strong/powerful. Good write! 5/5
I think it was fantastic up until the last 5 or 6 lines and then it seems like you got lost for exactly how to say what you wanted to say. Perhaps it's just me. It's very good though, and very emotional, which is what matters the most.