This is pretty good, i like it...
keep it up.. read some of mine if you wish...
vote: 4.0
~Angel

Brilliant. Extremely well written. I love your comparisons and your choice of words.

xoxoxo Haley

Very well written... Nice poem.

I love it.. its amazing.. its so good it has great word choice.. great flow and it has great rhythm. amazign job. i can relate. its amaizng. keep it up
take care
angie