OMG...this poem reminds me of the story of a good friend of mine........but I sure hope it's not a true one... :( :( If it is,I'm EVER so sorry, and even if it's not a FIVE for SURE!!!! absolutely beautiful poem...the words you some up with...wow. I will be looking forward to your next one with..hmmmmm...eager anticipation. How's that?? :) hahaha Luv Michelle

I'm sure you alreayd know what I think about this poem, and ofcourse it's a five, that was simply beautiful :'( wow, I cried, i'm such a baby, haha, but it was a really amazing poem, and i'm truely sorry for your loss, Stay Strong...OK? ANd keep writing, your wonderful!.....Make sure you keep checkin out mine k?

thnx i'm glad u liked my poem trust no one but it is kinda true well of course u can trust some people forever but their never friends always family but i'm glad u liked it

by the way great poem

i like the way you use things of everyday in your poems, especially the line "that well thumbed photograph that captured you mid-laugh." brings a certain realism to it all, making it more personal.

oh, thank you for your comments! never realised how powerful that line was. you're really sharp - that last verse, it's my head thinking, not the heart...