Lots of deep emotion-5/5 keep writing

Wow, i really love this poem. The rhyming is good and i love the flow. 5/5

Really good. You convey the emotion well. I'd just suggest reading through it again for spelling errors. I think u missed a 'u' in 'up'. not that my spelings much better ;)

Aww this poem gave me goosebumps.

it like defines whats going on in my life so much that i felt you read my journal or something!

you're a really good writer. yep.

I really liked this one.. it's very creative. 5/5

Good job! Very deep emotion... 5/5 =)
XoX
Love Chelsea

* i like this poem alot; 5/5 =)